In a blog called Plotting After Powder Burn - Part 1 I talked about the search for a plot for my fifth novel, which would be the
second in a series starring American wannabe-journo, Sam Blackett. I’d always
had a particular story in mind for this second book, but I was worried that it had
similarities to the 'Janac's Games' stories, and I felt I should make a break
from those boat-and-action dominated tales.
I
finished Part 2 concerned that the second book should be more urban, and more of an investigation
than an action thriller. I went off to find out what Lee Child did with Jack Reacher
in books one and two, as this series is the model for the Sam Blackett stories.
Well, it took a while - and there's been a few blogs floated under the bridge
on other topics since then - but I'm finally back to thinking about plotting
after Powder Burn.
I can
report that Lee Child started the Jack Reacher series with Killing Floor,
written in the first person about a counterfeiting fraud set in a small town in
Georgia, and mixing action with investigation. He followed that up with Die
Trying, which switched to the third person but maintained the mix of action and
investigation.
Powder
Burn is mostly action with the mystery-element relegated to a relatively minor
role - and so I think I definitely need to introduce more of an investigative
storyline to the Sam Blackett series in the second book. I've also thought a
lot about the milieu for this story and I now feel even more strongly that I
should try and find an urban setting for the book, to help me break out of the
ghetto of 'sailing author' that I fear I'm in danger of drowning in...
So far
so good - now any decent investigation needs a murder, preferably linked to a
serious criminal conspiracy. I've been casting around for just such a conspiracy
and I think I've found it. There's always been a huge market in counterfeit
aircraft parts; they look and feel like the real thing, but are often made much
more cheaply from sub-standard materials with low-cost manufacturing techniques.
Consequently, they don't have anything like the same life span as the real
deal.
This
fact might worry you if you fly a lot, but while the safety hazards of this
fake parts trade has been well known for a while, there now appears to be a national
security risk too - the trade has spread to military aircraft.
This is the sort of criminal conspiracy a good thriller needs - a gang plotting
to make a fortune from selling fake parts to the USAF for the F-22 Raptor, the
planet's most expensive fighter?
Or,
maybe it's drone parts - these things are much more controversial (anyone been
watching Homeland?) and that might really ramp the story up. It also plays
into a theme I've been thinking about for a while: Western military supremacy
relies on cheap and effective offensive dominance. It used to be gunboats, and
machine guns against spears. These tools provided such a massive military
advantage that they enabled the use of force at a minimal cost of lives - vitally
important to politicians in a democracy.
The
drone strike is the modern version of this, allowing the US to use swift and
brutal violence at zero (direct risk) of US casualties. So what if the fake
parts conspiracy threatened the drones, and this politically vital means of
applying American power in the hot spots of the world? I can feel my story juices
already starting to flow...
At the
very least this is a good starting point - the next step is to work out how Sam
Blackett might stumble into this conspiracy... but perhaps I should end the
'Plotting After Powder Burn' blogs right here, before I spoil the final book
for you - or until this story idea crashes and burns in development hell...